I don't know if you saw my other entry, but I got your card! Thanks a lot. ^^ I can't believe you even drew Bruno for me, LOL. Although yes, he does look girlish with the background...I had a hard time deciding if it were long curls or just random light patterns.
It's good to know that the flow of the story came through. My writing process is a very fragmented one, and I am constantly cutting paragraphs up & gluing them back together. In fact, my Chinese readers have told me that my Chinese fics are more like a series of montage. So being able to have a coherent story (for once) is no small feat for me. :P
Once again, thanks for spending a long time discussing this fic with me. I really benefited from your insight on the characterization, etc. :)
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It's good to know that the flow of the story came through. My writing process is a very fragmented one, and I am constantly cutting paragraphs up & gluing them back together. In fact, my Chinese readers have told me that my Chinese fics are more like a series of montage. So being able to have a coherent story (for once) is no small feat for me. :P
Once again, thanks for spending a long time discussing this fic with me. I really benefited from your insight on the characterization, etc. :)