You are totally right about Monza. That mistake was in the first draft, and I thought I had corrected it. However, for some reason it popped up again in the final version, and I didn't catch it until you pointed it out to me. It's now fixed. Thanks a million!
I'm glad you liked the story. The ending is a bit more subtle than I am used to, but from the feedback so far I'm guessing it worked. Phew. As for more Ayrton/Michael...if the plot bunny strikes again, by all means. :)
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Date: 2007-01-04 03:57 pm (UTC)I'm glad you liked the story. The ending is a bit more subtle than I am used to, but from the feedback so far I'm guessing it worked. Phew. As for more Ayrton/Michael...if the plot bunny strikes again, by all means. :)