Transfiguration makes me happy XD
Jul. 12th, 2009 03:09 amSnippet from Transfiguration (btw Tekko this title has been growing on me):
This is wrong because it's an abomination in the face of everything he's ever been taught, everything he's ever believed in. Yet Spock knowswith crystalized certainty, with a humbling fearthat he has never been more sure about anything as he's sure about this, in all the years God has given him on earth.
"Kiss me," he breathes against Jim's lips, eyes closing. "Please."
This is wrong because it's an abomination in the face of everything he's ever been taught, everything he's ever believed in. Yet Spock knowswith crystalized certainty, with a humbling fearthat he has never been more sure about anything as he's sure about this, in all the years God has given him on earth.
"Kiss me," he breathes against Jim's lips, eyes closing. "Please."
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Date: 2009-07-14 02:26 am (UTC)You might want to get rid of the 'a' before 'humbling fear' to make it parallel structure? IDK, it works either way, though