Rough Diamond (One Piece, Smoker/Hina)

[fatima]

Title: Rough Diamond
Pairing: Smoker/Hina
Fandom: One Piece
Rating: PG
Note: For pun's Kisses in the Rain Fic-A-Thon.

Rough Diamond
by Renata Lord (snowlight)

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It was a very firm kiss, no softness and no gentility. But her mouth was warm in the chilly winter drizzle and—you didn't really say no to Miss Hina. At least Smoker didn't see a reason to, even though the star pupil girl just matched over to him, grabbed his head and...did something with her lips and tongue.

She had a very talented tongue.

Still, he wasn't surprised when Hina let go of him and pulled away, shoulders straight and all, looking completely composed and even a bit critical. For a long moment she stared at him with a slightly tilted head, wet hair clinging to her face and dark eyes flashing.

Finally she announced: "You taste like cigar. It stinks."

"Well, maybe next time you should think about that before you decide to kiss a guy named Smoker."

That earned him another look, this time less severe.

"Hina did."

The world went quiet. He could hear all the sighs coming from the rain.

*

Finis

Comments

[pun.livejournal.com]

Ooh! You're right, I don't know the pairing, but I like this Hina. She's got moxy! *g*

[snowlight.livejournal.com]

:D Yeah she's a pretty cool character, one of my favorites from the many characters in that series (the pink haired on in the original post). Thank you for your fic that started it though. It really was very lovely.

I just love the way Hina says "Hina" insteatd of "I".

[onihime-sama.livejournal.com]

And so Smoker/Hina remains one of my favorite BG pairings.

Re: I just love the way Hina says "Hina" insteatd of "I".

[snowlight.livejournal.com]

Haha, to tell you the truth I had "I" there when I first wrote it. But then I remembered that Hina talks that way.

[cleric-chan.livejournal.com]

Appreciate your writing as always, I hope you write more One Piece het fic :)

[snowlight.livejournal.com]

谢谢啦～最近补了大部分OP的漫画，估计看了动画会有更多灵感的^^

[cleric-chan.livejournal.com]

恩我前段时间也补了漫画，发现我萌了你头像那位……

不过还是BG的CP很有爱>

[snowlight.livejournal.com]

Zoro吗？可以配Robin嘛～哈哈哈
或者那个没有吃相的船长姐姐(orz)