Rough Diamond (One Piece, Smoker/Hina)
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fatimaTitle: Rough Diamond
Pairing: Smoker/Hina
Fandom: One Piece
Rating: PG
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pun's Kisses in the Rain Fic-A-Thon.
Rough Diamond
by Renata Lord (snowlight)
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It was a very firm kiss, no softness and no gentility. But her mouth was warm in the chilly winter drizzle and—you didn't really say no to Miss Hina. At least Smoker didn't see a reason to, even though the star pupil girl just matched over to him, grabbed his head and...did something with her lips and tongue.
She had a very talented tongue.
Still, he wasn't surprised when Hina let go of him and pulled away, shoulders straight and all, looking completely composed and even a bit critical. For a long moment she stared at him with a slightly tilted head, wet hair clinging to her face and dark eyes flashing.
Finally she announced: "You taste like cigar. It stinks."
"Well, maybe next time you should think about that before you decide to kiss a guy named Smoker."
That earned him another look, this time less severe.
"Hina did."
The world went quiet. He could hear all the sighs coming from the rain.
*
Finis
Pairing: Smoker/Hina
Fandom: One Piece
Rating: PG
Note: For
pun's Kisses in the Rain Fic-A-Thon.Rough Diamond
by Renata Lord (
snowlight)*
It was a very firm kiss, no softness and no gentility. But her mouth was warm in the chilly winter drizzle and—you didn't really say no to Miss Hina. At least Smoker didn't see a reason to, even though the star pupil girl just matched over to him, grabbed his head and...did something with her lips and tongue.
She had a very talented tongue.
Still, he wasn't surprised when Hina let go of him and pulled away, shoulders straight and all, looking completely composed and even a bit critical. For a long moment she stared at him with a slightly tilted head, wet hair clinging to her face and dark eyes flashing.
Finally she announced: "You taste like cigar. It stinks."
"Well, maybe next time you should think about that before you decide to kiss a guy named Smoker."
That earned him another look, this time less severe.
"Hina did."
The world went quiet. He could hear all the sighs coming from the rain.
*
Finis
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Date: 2009-06-13 10:45 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-06-13 10:54 pm (UTC)I just love the way Hina says "Hina" insteatd of "I".
Date: 2009-06-14 12:44 am (UTC)Re: I just love the way Hina says "Hina" insteatd of "I".
Date: 2009-06-14 03:03 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-06-14 05:30 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-06-14 03:05 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-06-14 05:22 pm (UTC)不过还是BG的CP很有爱>
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Date: 2009-06-14 06:38 pm (UTC)或者那个没有吃相的船长姐姐(orz)