looking for beta for Transfiguration...round deux

[fatima]

Sadly, our dear le_culdesac has had a change in her schedule and is therefore unable to complete the beta as we had hoped. T_T (Thanks for all the work so far chica! It was truly a pleasure to work with you. :DDDD)

In the light of this, buoy and I are requesting beta assistance from any kind soul who have time and interest to do the following:

★suggest alternative word usage, correct grammar, etc (technical stuff)
★give opinion on characterisation, plot progression, etc
★point out the "???" and "!!!" parts encountered

(As with last time, I am trying to not ask in kirkspock because I want to keep the whole thing low-profile....)

Comments

[yevgenie.livejournal.com]

found it -- you got stuck in my spam trap. :( went back and fished the email out; I have a free night tonight, so will get started looking at it right away! :D

[snowlight.livejournal.com]

Thanks! Ah, damn the Hotmail. :P